Comments on: Friday Fiction – Deceived http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived Stay awhile. Thu, 04 Mar 2010 17:45:03 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Hoomi http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-905 Hoomi Sun, 21 Jun 2009 04:34:54 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-905 Very interesting POV, and nicely tied together. Biblical fiction always requires care that we don't impose something into the revealed story that isn't there, but I think you captured a very plausible alternate telling that corresponds well with the Genesis account. Very interesting POV, and nicely tied together. Biblical fiction always requires care that we don’t impose something into the revealed story that isn’t there, but I think you captured a very plausible alternate telling that corresponds well with the Genesis account.

]]> By: Sara Harricharan http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-899 Sara Harricharan Sat, 20 Jun 2009 03:40:08 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-899 Oooh, WOW! Never thought of that one. lol. So very real and I love the way you wrote Sarai. The ending was spot-on! This was definitely EC material! Glad I didn't miss it. Oooh, WOW! Never thought of that one. lol. So very real and I love the way you wrote Sarai. The ending was spot-on! This was definitely EC material! Glad I didn’t miss it.

]]> By: Karlene http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-898 Karlene Sat, 20 Jun 2009 01:09:44 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-898 Great POV, I often try and picture how the story must have played out from Sarai's perspective or others in other stories of the Bible. Check out "Promises Kept" at http://karlenejacobsen.blogspot.com Blessings, Karlene Great POV, I often try and picture how the story must have played out from Sarai’s perspective or others in other stories of the Bible.

Check out “Promises Kept” at http://karlenejacobsen.blogspot.com

Blessings,
Karlene

]]> By: Lynda Schultz http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-897 Lynda Schultz Fri, 19 Jun 2009 20:53:57 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-897 Funny how the curses turn into blessings and the blessings into curses. Great imagination—and credible. Funny how the curses turn into blessings and the blessings into curses. Great imagination—and credible.

]]> By: Joanne Sher http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-896 Joanne Sher Fri, 19 Jun 2009 20:16:23 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-896 Oh - creative! You KNOW I love Bible stories - and this one is VERY creative. No wonder you ECed! Excellent, Shirley - and hoping your family is getting healthier! Oh – creative! You KNOW I love Bible stories – and this one is VERY creative. No wonder you ECed! Excellent, Shirley – and hoping your family is getting healthier!

]]> By: Sherri Ward http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-895 Sherri Ward Fri, 19 Jun 2009 19:01:07 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-895 Oops, forgot to share my link... Today I continued on with 'Dusty Dreams' http://candidthought.blogspot.com/ Oops, forgot to share my link…
Today I continued on with ‘Dusty Dreams’
http://candidthought.blogspot.com/

]]> By: Sherri Ward http://shirleymcclay.com/friday-fiction-deceived/comment-page-1#comment-894 Sherri Ward Fri, 19 Jun 2009 18:59:31 +0000 http://shirleymcclay.com/?p=575#comment-894 Wow! Very well done! I need to dig into the word to tie it altogether but basically, I get it! Wow! Very well done! I need to dig into the word to tie it altogether but basically, I get it!

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