Comments on: Friday Fiction – Adventuring

By: Julie @ the Surrendered Scribe

Julie @ the Surrendered Scribe — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 19:55:51 +0000

Kudos to you, I hardly submitted at all that quarter feeling so clueless. Great research and story. Kevin was a neat character.

By: Lynda Schultz

Lynda Schultz — Sat, 11 Jul 2009 00:43:24 +0000

I remember reading this one when you submitted it for the Challenge. I love the idea of Kevin keeping the tradition.

By: Sherri Ward

Sherri Ward — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 22:55:30 +0000

Good story, great message! I liked how peaceful Kevin was in spite of hard circumstances, knowing God was with him.

By: Sara Harricharan

Sara Harricharan — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 21:46:21 +0000

Great job with the atmosphere. I love how Kevin was such a unique character and even in disguise too, it seemed. Great stuff! Definitely interesting to read! ^_^

By: terri tiffany

terri tiffany — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 19:42:13 +0000

Great story and good job! You made me feel like I was there.

By: Joanne Sher

Joanne Sher — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 19:05:18 +0000

Wonderful relationships, AND such great atmosphere. Glad you posted this, Shirley, as I didn’t get a chance to read it in the challenge.